First, there's the title. There's nothing wrong with calling a book Unconventional -- and with frequent use of the word -- but if you're going to you'd better make sure it is. Unfortunately, this is possibly the most conventional and by-the-numbers book I've ever read.
Second, it just doesn't ring true. People don't act like this and what's worse according to the Bible they shouldn't. It feels less like a story growing organically from a group of characters than a bunch of characters shoehorned into an existing plot.
Most importantly, the author seems to have confused the Gospel with the American Dream. This is essentially a Horatio Alger rags-to-riches story with enough Jesus on top that it could be sold in Christian bookstores.
This is Hebert's first novel, and I sincerely hope that he's become a better writer. As it stands, though, this book shouldn't have been published. I don't recommend it,
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